Every author has his or her own self-bias that makes looking at one's work objectively a nearly impossible task. However, I do hope to improve my literary skills through this experience. Towards that end, I would like to ask you, the other RPers, how I might improve my writing.
If you have any suggestions at all, I would be very happy to hear them. Trust me, I won't be insulted, I just want to know how I can make my posts better for you, the readers.
Do you think I should work on my descriptions? Perhaps a more varied vocabulary? Or should I aim to incorporate a wider range of sentence structures? Please, whatever it is that you think, feel free to tell me honestly; I need it.
Thanks in advance and still rampantly yours,
Durandal
Spirit Wolf
I got one bit of advice, don't use big freaken words! Keep it simple stupid. We ain't your English teachers.
ginpu
but the big words add flair to the RPing. I for one like it. It's more intriguing to read a well thought out paragraph describing the events then I hit him, he hit me, i sliced him with my ginsu blue and purple glowing chainsaw.
RPing is an art. You want a hack and slash type game? Go play Diablo II. keke
Spirit Wolf
I would, but my computer is on life support right now. Meh, other than that, I dunno.
