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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 11:02 pm Post subject: the 'new' Blue62 (again)
Don't ask, I'm missing some things, from the evil 'writers block'.
Name: Markus Malkovich (Sparticus 113B)
Race: Terran
Sex: Male
Height: 6' 9"
Weight: 290LB
Occupation: Genetic Super Soldier Experiment
Description
Hair style: bald
Color: N/A
Length: 0?
Eyes style: flat, almost reptilian as a result of the genetic alterations
Tattoos: serial number 113B on right biceps.
Clothing: Thermal suit under battle armour, white t-shirt and blue jeans with a brown leather belt when 'on leave'
Weapons:
1. Class 8 SSPW (Solid State Particle Weapon)
2. 25mm Handgun
Armour: Mark IV SPARTICUS Battle Armour
Skills:
1. Sharpshooting
2. Hand-to-hand
Strengths:
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Weaknesses:
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Char Bio: He knows virtually nothing about his past other than he was part of a Soviet ‘Super-Soldier’ program called the SPARTICUS Program. His earliest memories are waking up from the programming pod and being released from the program. After a month in conscious rehabilitation, he was issued his weapons and sent to the field for combat against the insurgents. And now he is here....wherever ‘here’ is.....
(Main problem is finding weaknesses. and thus a lot of my characters are kinda 'godish'.) _________________ Blood is thicker than water, friendship just as strong
-Jag Laskovich
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 12:32 am Post subject: Irallia Character
Name: Piper
Age: ?
Race: Dragon
Occupation: experianced traveler/mercenary (for food/shelter) now employed by the resistance
Rank: General in the Resistance
Weapons: Claws, teeth, members of other races
Armor: forged steel
Skills: flight, firebreathing
Magic: ?
Weaknesses: Thinner scales on my belly and no armour on my tail
Description: About 6ft long, light blue scales, weigh about 100 lbs
History: I was born from a egg (duh) and spent my early years 'terrorising' the older dragons in the area for thier knowledge. When the Empire began expanding they invaded and tried to force our kinds to be as horses to them. When we resisted they began slaughtering dragons. _________________ Blood is thicker than water, friendship just as strong
-Jag Laskovich
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Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 11:05 pm Post subject:
Debated a long time over this but hey what the heck. Just to warn you he is (almost) a god-type character, am trying to work in some faults. Other than the unpredictable bloodwrath. Any help would be most appreciated so here he is:
Rattrap Gonzales
Edit: gaah, an hour later and I still feel like I'm missing stuff. oh well
Name: Commander Rattrap Gonzales
Code Names: Siberian Black, Ghost
Race: Jahorian
Sex: Male
Height: 7' 2"
Weight: 290lbs
Age: Approximately 35 years Jahorian- 2450 Earth Standard Years- when considering Jahoria’s orbit is approximately 70 times that of Earths
Occupation: Member of the mercenary groups The Siberian Patrol
Description: essentially a humanoid rat
Hair style: fur over his entire body except his tail
Color: black
Length: about three to four inches long but he keeps it cut (ragged since he uses his claws or a knife) over his eyes
Eyes style: small pupils with a dark, almost black iris which changes to bright red when under the influence of the bloodwrath
Tattoos/distinctive markings: top teeth stick out a bit when his mouth is closed
Clothing: normally only his weapon pack (will be edited to fit RP standards although full kit is shown here) and a black leather belt. He always wears a small gold ring on a string around his neck in memory of his mother whom he believed dead when he found it. (See bio for more detail)
Armament: complete weapons kit- will be edited for specific RP’s
main armament
1- Tail: about 5 miles long all told but he has a matter compressor attached to his nervous system that keeps it to about four feet on average. Sort of has a mind of it’s own so he sometimes actually loses control of what it does (never got that part fully but hey)
4- Claws: 3.5 inches long when fully extended, sharp enough to cut through any solid material
2- 1.00 Calibre Machine Gun: anti-armour weapon adapted for infantry use. Complex gas return lines to minimise recoil although generally remains fatal for humans to fire it unsupported. Matter compressor clip in pistol style grip.
2- 50mm Type 3 BALLISTICS: capable of delivering High Impact, High Explosive, Biological, Chemical, and (theoretically) nuclear warheads. Matter compressor clip in pistol style grip
2- ‘Energy Grenade Rifle’: custom designed/built launchers for impact detonated energy grenades
2- Type 6 Plasma Pistol: big pair of pincers you hold in your hand...saw the shape on Lexx the 5 episodes I watched
2- Type 4 Plasma Rifle: think Covenant Auto rifles only really blocky (was slightly obsessed with Halo at the time)
1- 0.52 Sniper Rifle: floating barrel has been fixed, matter compressor clip in the stock
1- 12 Gauge Tactical(II): multi-mode laser carbine.
1- Black Lightsaber: powered by an anti-matter crystal
1- 14inch throwing knife: big knife. Large gemstone at the crosspiece between the blade and the hilt
Vehicles: may or may not need ‘em but here they are
SF-16D Blackbird: 2- 20mm Minigun, 24- Internal Hardpoints, 12- External Hardpoints
Scorpion Tank: 2- 150mm Cannons, 15- ‘Reefer' Missiles
Class IV Mechon (Heavy): each hand is equipped with two-hold weapons converter systems:
Right Hand: M-4 Chaingun (belt-fed from matter compressor pack) and a Mk2 Boresaw
Left Hand: TK-6 Dragonfire (fed from half-tank mounted on back) and a 120mm Cannon (clip-fed from matter compressor clip)
Back: 8X Surface to Surface/Air Missiles
Neurolink in cockpit (feed control command through my brain)
Thrust enhancers
Makatua Class III Heavy Tank (175mm energy cannon, 16X Surface-to-air/surface Hellfire Mk IV, 30mm E-Vulcan)
Armour: normally doesn’t wear armour but does own a set of native Jahorian battle armour. More or less a classic knight although a lot more fluid and organic looking (despite being made of titanium alloy). Doesn’t have a helmet and only covers the upper legs to the knees
Skills:
1. Sharp shooting- never misses where he intends to place the bullet, knife, etc.
2. Regenerative abilities- still working the bug out of that one, but it’s basically slightly faster than Wolverine’s power.
Char Bio: Born and raised on Jahoria, his mother was a well known and respected new anchor who was official assassinated for her out spoken stories against the reigning dictator High King Noggo. During the struggle, when she was forcibly taken form their home by a group of imperial enforcers, his father was killed. Three years after that they ‘buried’ his mother an as he was only ten at the time didn’t realize the difference between an empty coffin and a full one. Growing up in various foster homes he had difficulty making friends. Since based on his time of birth, he was naturally faster, stronger and darker furred than other his own age. At twenty, he enlisted in a local security force and a few months later, the groups was disbanded and it’s members pressed into military service. Approximately a year after that, the pressed Andiron population released a rebellion against Noggo that had been brewing for years. During that time he took every opportunity to ditch his patrolling partner and built up a reputation for always completing his mission with a high degree of success. During this time he was captured and used in an experimental cloning procedure that left him hating everything the Noggo empire stood for and a clone he was to later befriend out of a goal to rule the galaxy. Six month into the rebellion Rattrap and his superior had a fight during a convoy operation days after a prisoner was captured. The superior lost a hand for it. Keeping in close contact with the prisoner, Rattrap eventually freed him and the pair made their way to the capital where they boarded a troop transport headed for the Andiron homeworld. On Andiron, the prisoner- Multi- ad Rattrap tracked down the scientist who had been responsible for Rattrap’s abduction. Scorpanox was as ready to defect as they were and the trio made their way off the plant and into obscurity. Rattrap grew tired of hiding and left Multi and Scorpanox to work for small time mercenaries Star Fox. It didn’t hold out as a steady job and he began operating as an independent mercenary and traveller. He found his way to Earth and spent several years working for a covert operations organisation called G.U.E.S.S. until their top agent was killed. I a but of slight depression, he returned to Scorpanox’s home. Eventually Noggo informants caught up to them and they left for Coruscant to meet with the famed, Jag Laskovich, a wanted ex-imperial officer who had worked with Scorpanox in the past. Between Coruscant and Earth, the Patrol was forged and hours after they had returned the presidents daughter to her planet, they were allied with Earth and en route to Reach. Along the way they intercepted a prison ship destined to Keldon- the Mys Imperial torture and slaughter house. There, they found Rattrap’s mother at the hands of the ‘Druids’ and they spent the next eight months later Keldon was free of the Druid scourge and the Patrol had gained four new members- Data, a droid built by Scorpanox, Marla Gonzales, and Blark and Honk Honk, a pair of Elites who bound themselves to the patrol as slip pilots. They had also gained a new ship and when they returned to Earth having sent the newly acquired Curtis to some allies to be repaired they found a completely new political situation. The United States had split up as had Vancouver Island. Today the Patrol exists as a multi-trillion credit company sustaining ten capital ships and one independent starbase. Rattrap retains his position as Chief Weapons Officer aboard their flagship the Commissioner, under Fleet Admiral Laskovich’s command. _________________ Blood is thicker than water, friendship just as strong
-Jag Laskovich
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Posted: Thu May 24, 2007 11:16 pm Post subject:
well the fact that he's suppouse to be a god type thats a problem . In the main game even those who are gods are drasticly reduced in power something caused them to lose their powers and become weakend in the main games. _________________ Don't make me beat you with my spoon.
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 12:17 am Post subject:
Honestly, he wasn't intended to be I just have a problem where I have touble finding faults in things. Originally the only thing that could kill him was cynide poison and his claws could cut any material including energy projections.....unless they appeared green.
And this from an actual rat that carried the tail wrapped around a giant stick (was my explanation when Dad asked me about it)?
Yeah.....it's a long WIP.
sadly enough all of 'em are kinda like that.....classic Indiana Jones invicible. _________________ Blood is thicker than water, friendship just as strong
-Jag Laskovich
Location: That little voice in the back of your head telling you to kill people.
Posted: Fri May 25, 2007 1:31 am Post subject:
If I was to disect your char it would take me a week to point out all the problems with it.
You really can't or don't know how to play anything but all powerful chars do you.
I see this all to much gH and BB have similar problems. and it seams that the new guy that plays nagas is very similar.
While GH and BB are getting better at this I do beleive you and the Naga guy are going to need some help in this department.
Oh well. I'm sorry if you see me slaming you here but i'm not. I'm just pointing out what I see. I know I'm bad at this some times myself but this place isn't for those types of chars. in the main games they won't go over better.
Like the claws. can cut thru any solid mass I mean come on. thats just cheesy. _________________ Don't make me beat you with my spoon.
I find the best way to make a flawed character is to take your perfect character and pull them apart.
Think about when you were a child of around 6-8 years old. There wasn't a whole lot you could do compared to what you can do now, right? Your character can eventually become what you envision, but you have to start at the bottom. The character has to grow up by interacting with the other players and gain experience. With that experience, you can gain one of those abilities or features that you want your character to have.
Even if your character is as old as the hills, he still has to start from the bottom with every one else.
Take away the tail. Toss out the claws, which rats do not have retractable claws, so they would always be out. Yes even wererats don't have retractable claws. hehe
The gun? just turn it into a Glock or something more simple. Toss the warheads, nix the energy grenade rifle, extinguish the laser carbine, toss out the lightsaber, byebye plasma rifle and pistol, meh, keep the knife. Always good to have a melee and ranged weapon.
All that vehicle stuff? go aways. Keep the Neurolink. The armor should be reduced to something more practical. Chainlink is going to be closer to the easier moving aspect you mention.
Sharp shooting is fine. But never missing is not. He has a high skill, but he'll still miss from time to time. No one is perfect.
Regen, I would say is ok, but I would say he's capable of healing X amount a day. Not wolverine fast.
You could probably add a little magic or say he has great reflexes, high dexterity something reasonable.
That still leaves you room for flaws. Everyone has flaws. Let's say...mmm... His feet are a bit larger than normal, and he has a tendency to trip every now and then. He's got one eye, he lost a limb, afraid of heights, afraid of spiders... those kinds of things.
I know it can be difficult, and the desire to be the top dog runs inside all of us. But this is a group effort. We all work together to achieve the end results. No one is better than anyone else. (Except for the GM sometimes, especially when they need to make a point) Everyone is a piece of the puzzle.
And I agree with Deme. BB & GH have improved. _________________ Sarcasm, just one more service that I offer.
:X Heh... I still new to the whole RPing. My first one was the 2kinds Vs. one and everyone was GMing and I literally just moved my Char over to this one so what did you expect? _________________ [size=20]Gravity is a contributing factor in nearly 73% of all accidents involving falling objects.[/size]
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